Question

The topic sentences in these paragraphs are not clear. They do not help the reader to focus on the main idea. Read each paragraph. Then rewrite the topic sentence so that it is clear and focused.

Once I bought some new face cream. I wanted to look younger, and I thought the face cream would help me. But I couldn't find it anywhere. I tried four different stores in my city. Finally, I drove to another city. I got stuck in traffic for almost two hours. When I finally arrived at the store, it was closed. I went back the next week and bought the face cream. But it didn't work at all!

what is the topic sentence?



We are all human, and we all make mistakes. Last year, I used a credit card to buy some language learning CDs. The salesman promised that I could learn three different languages while I slept. Unfortunately, I learned nothing. I tried to return the CDs, but I couldn't get my money back. It took me several months to pay for them, and I really
regret buying the CDs.
what is the topic sentence?


My uncle bought a fraudulent hair product. He has been bald for a long time. Last year, he saw an ad for a new hair product on TV. My uncle bought the product and used it right away. Then he went to a party and noticed that people were laughing at him. He looked in a mirror and saw that his bald head was turning blue. He tried washing off the color, but nothing worked.
what is the topic sentence?

Answer 1

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