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nesesito que me ayuden a mirar los errores de este texto en inglesI am really glad that I was deciding (decided) to rent this apartment. I almost was not move here because the rent is a little high, but I am to be here. All the other apartments I looked at were seeming so small, and the neighborhoods just weren´t as beautiful as this one. And moving wasn´t as bad as I fear. My original plan was to take a week off from work, but when Hakim was offering to help, I didn´t need so much time. What a great brother! We were moving everything into the apartment in two days. The man next door was really nice to us. On the second day, he even helped Hakim with some of the heavy furniture.Organiz His name is Jared I don´t even unpack the kitchen stuff last weekend because I was so tired. Last night I walking Mitzi for only two blocks. When I came back, Jared was standing downstairs. I think I made him nervous because he was dropping his mail when he saw me. I`d like to ask him over for coffee this weekend (in order to thank him), but everything is still in boxes. Maybe in a couple of weeks…..

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I am really glad that I was deciding (decided) to rent this apartment. I almost was not move here because the rent is a little high, but I am to be here. All the other apartments I looked at were seeming so small, and the neighborhoods just weren´t as beautiful as this one. And moving wasn´t as bad as I fear. My original plan was to take a week off from work, but when Hakim was offering to help, I didn´t need so much time. What a great brother! We were moving everything into the apartment in two days. The man next door was really nice to us. On the second day, he even helped Hakim with some of the heavy furniture.Organiz His name is Jared I don´t even unpack the kitchen stuff last weekend because I was so tired. Last night I walking Mitzi for only two blocks. When I came back, Jared was standing downstairs. I think I made him nervous because he was dropping his mail when he saw me. I`d like to ask him over for coffee this weekend (in order to thank him), but everything is still in boxes. Maybe in a couple of weeks…..