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In the essay I will talk about the first world war that was in Europe on 28 June, 1914 and ended on 11 November, 1918. This war was one of the largest historical events in the world as it led to the death of thousands of people in the world.
In this world war all the great powers of the world were involved, who were the ones who aligned themselves in 2 opposing sides. The first called The Allies of "The Triple Entente" and the second the central powers of "The Triple Alliance." Which were also the cause of the war and the consequences it brought.
The murder of the Austrian-Hungarian archduke, Franz Ferdinand, in Sarajevo, Serbia (June 28, 1994) was the immediate cause of the First World War, apart from other causes, such as the imperialism of the foreign policies of the great European powers, including the German Empire, the Austro-Hungarian Empire, the Russian Empire, the British Empire, France and Italy, all played a decisive role. The assassination of Franz Ferdinand by the Yugoslavian Gavrilo Princip, which resulted in the beginning of the war. European powers invoked various alliances formed years and decades ago, so only a few weeks after the assassination, the great powers were at war. During the conflict more than 70 million soldiers were mobilized, including 60 million Europeans, which makes it one of the greatest wars in history. More than 9 million combatants died, many because of the technological advances of the arms industry, which ravaged an infantry that was used in a massive.
On 28 July, the conflict began with the invasion of Serbia by Austria-Hungary, followed by the invasion of Belgium, Luxembourg and France by the German Empire, and the attack of Russia against Germany. After the German advance towards Paris a stop was reached, and the Western Front was stabilized in a static war of attrition based on an extensive network of trenches that hardly underwent significant changes until 1917. On the eastern front, the Russian army fought successfully against Austria-Hungary, but was forced to withdraw by the German army. Additional fronts opened after the entry into the war of the Ottoman Empire in 1914, The Allied or Entente side was configured from the Triple Entente. When in the summer of 1914, Serbia and Belgium were attacked by the Central Empires, these two countries joined the Allies. Their rapid condition of invaded countries made their contribution scarce. In August, Japan declared war on Germany, annexed its few eastern possessions and, from then on, hardly participated in the conflict.
In August 1916, Romania joined the Entente, although it was quickly invaded by the Central Empires. On 16 January, 1917 (during the First World War), a telegram was sent to Mexico from the German Empire, proposing to Mexico that he would return his lands if he ally with Germany and put himself against States. United, but was intercepted by the British espionage services, and its content accelerated the entry of the United States into the war. After a German offensive along the Western Front in 1918, US forces entered the trenches and the Allies of the Triple Entente drove the German army back in a series of successful offensives. After the November Revolution of 1918 that forced the abdication of the Kaiser, Germany accepted the armistice on the 11th of the same month.
At the end of the war, four imperial powers (the German, Russian, Austro-Hungarian and Ottoman Empires) had been defeated militarily and politically and disappeared. The first two, the German and the Russian, lost a lot of territories, and the other two, the Austro-Hungarian and the Ottoman, were completely dissolved.
The First World War was hurried due to the assassination of the Archduke of Austria-Hungary. However, the real cause was the ambition of the expansionism of the imperialist powers. All because confrontations and frictions between the policies of the states had already been rigid. You can’t talk about anything other than the expansionist interest, which in turn speaks of an economic interest, which caused all this conflict.

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