Question

alguien me podría corregir esto?? Gracias de ante mano! :)
The last Monday, I was on New York with some friends. We went together to the zoo and we saw lions, tigers, monkeys, snakes, sharks, and other animals of the jungle and ocean. When we was in the aquarium a kid scaped of his mother to the monkey cage because something funny was happening.
There, a chimpanzee began to greet giving his hand to all people present. Include us, which we running after the kid, for help to his altered mother. Everybody reacted with emotion and happiness.
But the securities was very attentive in case of something goes out of control. Since everything was fine and quiet, all us only took photos and continued our tour normally.

Answer 1

l was in NY. We went to the zoo.and other animals from the jungle and the ocean. when we were... a kid scaped away from his mother...

including us, that we were runningafter the kid to help his altered mother. the security was very attentive n case ofsomething went out of control. "fine and quiet, all of us took photos"