Question

Por favor alguien me dice si me quedó bien el texto, especialmente las partes en pasado simple y continuo.
One day, a few years ago, Jennifer was driving home from work. Suddenly, the car stopped and Jennifer was shocked, she saw the smoke from the motor and she did not know what was happening. Later, she asked help and two boys arrived in a car to help her.
The boys told her that needed tools, she was searching the tools when the boys stole her bag. She called the police and narrated what happened.

Answer 1

One day, a few years ago, Jennifer was driving home from work. Suddenly, the car stopped and Jennifer was shocked, she saw the smoke from the motor and she didnt know whatever was happening. then, she asked help and two boys arrived in a car to help her.

The boys told her that they needed some tools, she was searching for the tools but then the boys stole her bag. She called the police and narrated what happened. ***