Question

Me and my family we went to Knott's berry farm and I ride the extreme roller coasters with them.

usually we go to Six Flags, when i was a lil kid i used to ride the catterpillar.

I usually play strategy games to win rewards in six flags magic mountain.

My father used to ride all the xtreme roaller coasters, now not because he got stomach pain

pueden checar las oraciónes? que este bien la ortografia y si no me puede dar ayuda con la redacción, la ultima empieza en pasado y despues de la coma que presente quiero ver si esta bien.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

estan bien solo no te olvides del presente continuo

Answer 2

Respuesta:

Acá va corregido

Explicación:

Me and my family went to Knott's berry farm and I ride the extreme roller coasters with them.

Usually we go to Six Flags, when i was a kid i used to ride the catterpillar.

I usually play strategy games to win rewards in six flags magic mountain.

My father used to ride all the extreme roaller coasters, now don't because he get stomach pain