Question

Por favor me podria colaborar revisando esta tarea de inlgles
historia corta sobre tu infancia usando la expresión USED TO. 15 lineas.
Esto he realizado.
Well, when I was a girl, I used to collect rag dolls. You know, when I was a kid, I used to play brave cops and fast drivers. When I was a girl, I used to sing songs to my elementary. school teacher. When I was a girl, I used to watch Mexican entertainment and music programs.
When I was a girl, I used to fold paper and I shared them here at school. When I was a child, I used to give my shoes and clothes to the poor.
When I was a girl, I used to give my toys for Christmas. When I was a girl, in Medellín I used to fight for dolls
When I was a child, I used to have all these toy dolls, and instead of throwing them I bathed them and dressed them. When I was a child, my mother used to talk to me about cleaning, you know about its importance. When I was a girl, I used to swim in the river every week.
You know, when I was a girl, I used to stand in front of the mirror, my image was there, and I used to convince myself that we were beautiful.
When I was a girl, I used to go swimming in our grandparents' pool.
When I was a child, I used to say that if you treat people with kindness and respect, things will turn out well.
When I was a child, I used to draw pictures, tasks of my friends.
You know, when I was a girl I used to go to the city to sell objects made of wood and paper.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

Yo quitaria los well y you know. Ya que es como si fuera una redaccion. Mientras tanto lo demas esta impecable, o eso creo.

Explicación:

Answer 2

Lo correcto sería decir, "When I was child" Supongo que lo traduciste con Google traductor (Lo digo por las pero palabras avanzadas y poco comunes que estan en ese texto) pero todo esta bien