• Asignatura: Inglés
  • Autor: EleanorStarr
  • hace 8 años

Hola! podría alguien decirme si gramaticalmente esta bien escrito este texto, corregirme lo que este mal.
La tarea consistía en hacer un texto siguiendo una serie de tiempos verbales...
Por favor!

My name is Camilo López. I live in buenos aires. I often travel more places around the world and my favourite place in the world is Japan. I love their culture and I think that their customs are wonderful.
I always travel every year to Tokio to visit my friend Akemi Izumi. He is studying to become a Doctor. He will graduate in a year and He sometimes dreams of that moment.
I was in Japan last year in April. I arrived on Monday to Tokio. Akemi went to pick me up and then we went to his house to rest. Later we went to tour the city.
A few days later we had a picnic in Nara Park to saw Sakura tres and enjoy them. We were spending a good time when started to rain.
One night we were in Matsuri (Japanese festival). I was buying to same things while Akemi was waiting for his friends for to went together at New York Bar. We were eating ramen, sushi and for dessert dangos.
Today I am going to travel to Japan again for have more adventures with Akemi. The flight leaves at 8 a.m. and I feel very anxious.

Respuestas

Respuesta dada por: giovanna2706
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pues... si seguiste las recomendaciones para hacer el texto está bien.

aparentemente todo está bien con la gramatica.
una correción jajaja
sakura trees**

EleanorStarr: jajaj fue el corrector.
Muchísimas gracias!!!!
Respuesta dada por: cherrychanv
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Respuesta:

  • favorite
  • trees

todo lo demás está bien ;3

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