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por favor me podrían ayudar con este texto quiero sabes si esta bien me pidieron utilizar el presente simple y verbos regulares y irregulares


On Saturday I got up at 8:30 in the morning. After preparing coffee, I got dressed and went to the bank because I had to make some payments. The bank is one hour from my house. When I arrived, there was not a long line, so I paid and left.
Then I went to the butcher shop to look for meat. I also stopped at the market to get some tomatoes. I wanted to make pasta When I got home, I wrote a couple of emails about my work.
After a while I started to feel hungry, so I decided to go visit my aunt so she could invite me to lunch, she prepared noodles with meat was delicious, I had lunch with my cousins,
Where we told ourselves everything we had done during all the time we had not seen each other were unforgettable moments since we saw each other again after two years. Before we met to talk every weekend but now for the study work we can not see each other much anymore.
It was beautiful to spend a weekend with them, the time went so fast that I did not realize it was already 8:00 pm, so I decided to go back to my house. I was very hungry, so when I got home I made some fried eggs . After that I did my homework and went to sleep.

Answer 1

After I prepared coffee, I got dressed and I went to the bank because I had to make some payments. The bank is one hour from my house. When I arrived, there was not a long line, so I paid and left.
Then I went to the butcher shop to look for meat. I also stopped at the market to get some tomatoes. I wanted to make pasta When I got home, I wrote a couple of emails about my work.
After a while I started to feel hungry, so I decided to go visit my aunt so she could invite me to lunch, she prepared noodles with meat which were delicious, I had lunch with my cousins,

solo tienes un par de errores en lo demás el texto está entendible ;-)