Question

¿Que errores hay en el siguiente texto?

My dear friend many thanks for your message; it is great to know about you i’m glad to know that you´re coming. you must arrive to the yokohama train station an hour before the train departures, after the train arrives in tokyo, you should take the bus from the train station to narita international airport. i recommend you have your passport and boarding pass on hand before check-in. the flight to los angeles it’s too long so, considering the arrival time, it is better for you to spend the night in the airport hotel. you can get up early and do some shopping at the duty free section of los angeles airport. (it is at terminal 2). the gate for the flight from bogota is in terminal 5. therefore, you must take a shuttle from terminal 2 to terminal 5, it´ll takes 15 minutes or, if you prefer walking but you´ll spend 35 minutes. i do not recommend you to walk because if you delay you may lose your flight. now i am working in the afternoons, so i can’t pick you up, there for after you get to bogotá, you have to go pass through immigration checkpoints, after that you can go to the section baggage and collect your luggage. there are taxi points at the airport where you can ask for a safe taxi and request the driver to take you to the downtown, where i live. hope to hear from you soon

Answer 1

Hay varias cosas muy imprescindibles pero no tan importantes a la hora de hacer una carta aunque deberías tomarlas muy en cuenta.

1.- Te faltan varias palabras de ciudades, capitales de países, nombres de establecimientos como el aeropuerto y las palabras después de un punto que deben empezar por mayúscula.

2.- Los 'i', siempre y en todo momento deben estar escritos en mayúscula como 'I'.

3.- Como toda carta debes de empezar con un ' Dear friend _____ , ' y despedirte con 'Kisses o XX' considerando que esta carta no es formal.

4.- Tienes que pausarte de una mejor manera, cada vez que vayas a terminar una frase en los puntos.