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On my next holiday, I’m going to california . I’m going to stay in a hotel in the city center. I’m going to visit all the important sights, and I'm going to spend some time at the beach.
I'm going to visit my relatives, I'm going to eat a lot of seafood,we are going to visit the vegas, then we are going to go sightseeing around the city. the last week of august my sister and I are going to the village to visit my grandparents, we are Going to the ranch to enjoy the nature , we are going to cycling breathing fresh air. After visiting all that, we will eat traditional food in the center of the city. I'm going to a party with my friends to drink lots of beer.

Answer 1

si esta vien pero creo no estoy vien segura creo que en drink en la parte final es drank creo

Answer 2

I’m going to visit California in my next holiday. I’m going to stay in a hotel in the city center. I’m going to visit all the important sights, and I'm going to spend some time at the beach. 
I'm going to visit my relatives, I'm going to eat a lot of seafood,we are going to visit Las Vegas, then we are going to go sightseeing around the city. The last week of August my sister and I are going to visit my grandparents in the village, we are going to go to their ranch to enjoy nature , we are going to cycle and  breath fresh air. After visiting all those places and people, we will eat some traditional food in the center of the city. I'm going to a party with my friends to drink a lot of beer.