Question

¿Es este poema apto para una antología?
Estoy escribiendo una antología para mi clase de Literatura, y quería saber si este poema es lo suficientemente decente como para un libro serio. Gracias

What made me think this one would last?
What made me think it wouldn't be gone in a blast?
Yeah, he made me believe in friendship
Yeah, he made me believe in love
But there's nothing left anymore
I've lost the one I used to adore



What's the point of society?
Whenever you trust you get betrayed
With your soul impregned with anxiety
Feeling used, feeling played



Will we ever be restricted?
Will this someday be over?
Or will we keep hurting each other
In our own prison of growing rage convicted



Here's an advice for the future
For everyone who has a friend
For everyone with befriending intent
Do not trust anyone; those wounds can't be sutured

Answer 1

Esta Bien para un libro esta bien