Question

Yesterday the first thing I did was take a bath, later I started doing my homework. Later in the afternoon I was in classes and then in some spare time I continued doing my homework. Finally I went for a walk and went back to sleep.

¿me pueden decir si esta bien estructurado y si no como quedaría bien? ​

Answer 1

Respuesta:

Yesterday the first thing I did was take a bath, then I started doing my homework. Later in the afternoon, I was in class and then, in my free time, I continued to do my homework. I finally went for a walk and went back to sleep.

Explicación:

esta bien solo le faltaba algunas comas y correciones de ortografia y pautas de  

Later in the afternoon I was

despeues de afternoon va una coma por lo demas esta bien