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The bathroom in my house In my house there are three bathrooms, but this is the main one, my family and I use it daily. The bathroom in general consists of the following parts: the toilet, the sink the bathroom mirror, the shower, and finally the drawers where we keep the toiletries and personal care. Toiletries are basically: toothbrushes, floss, toothpaste rinse mouthpiece, combing brush, combs body creams and face creams, blocker, deodorants, comb cream, gel, lotions, perfumes, hair iron, cotton , Alcohol, make-up remover, etc. In the shower we have body soap, hair soap, shampoo, bath sponge, hair treatment, etc. Every month we go with my family to the supermarket to buy more cleaning utensils. Every day we clean the bathroom so that it stays clean. Apart from this bathroom which is the main one, there are two others, one of those is for the visit, this has the toilet a hand soap mirror and a hand towel. The other is a bathroom that is used only on special occasions, such as: Christmas, parties at home, birthdays, etc.

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In my house there are three bathrooms, but this is the main one, my family and I use it daily. The bathroom in general consists of the following parts: the toilet, the sink,the bathroom mirror, the shower, and finally the drawers where we keep the toiletries and personal care. Toiletries are basically: toothbrushes, floss, toothpaste, rinse, mouthpiece, combing brush, combs, body creams and face creams, blocker, deodorants, comb cream, gel, lotions, perfumes, hair iron, cotton , Alcohol, make-up remover, etc. In the shower we have a body soap, a hair soap, shampoo, a bath sponge, hair treatment, etc. Every month we go with my family to the supermarket to buy more cleaning utensils. Every day we clean the bathroom so that it stays clean. Apart from this bathroom which is the main one, there are two others, one of those is for the visit, this has the toilet, a hand soap mirror and a hand towel. The other is a bathroom that is used only on special occasions, such as Christmas, parties at home, birthdays, etc.