Question

Hola, quiero saber si este parrafo esta bien escrito y si se observa claramente que estoy respondiendo estas preguntas:
1) Who do you admire?
2) Why?
3) What do you have in common?
4) How are you different?

Les pido su ayuda porfavor, porque es para una exposición ☺☺

PARRAFO:

I admire my mom, because she's reliable, generous, honest and strong. I can trust my mom, because I know that I will never be disappointed and will be by my side supporting me in the most difficult moments of my life. Besides helping people, giving them clothing and food, but above all preaching to them of the love of God.
We're very similar in some ways. We love to worship God from the bottom of our heart. Also, we don't watch TV but we do see news on the computer, we love to watch comedy movies and with a little romance and we hate horror movies. The differences we have, is that my mom is very strong and does not let herself beat easily for the problems but I'm a bit weak in that aspect. Also, my mom's very organized and I'm pretty disorganized.

PSDT: este es un ejemplo del libro

Marina
Ooh, good question . . . Um, my sister. She's really generous. I mean, she's always helping people. Like, she volunteers at a hospital on weekends and everything. We're very similar in some ways. Like, we're both into sports, and we're extremely competitive. Yeah, we both try really hard to win. But I guess she's pretty disorganized. You know, she doesn't always plan things well, and I'm – well, I am pretty organized.

Answer 1

si esta bien escrito,ten calma todo saldrá bien

Answer 2

esta bien te aseguro que sacaras buena nota no tienes por que preocuparte