Question

Por favor decirme si esto está escrito bien gramaticalmente o hay que cambiar algo es importante que esté bien lo que haya mal ponérmelo escrito en inglés plisss


I love shopping is one of my favorite activities whenever I have free time is what I do. I like to go to shopping malls where there are always many shops, I always look at all the shops in the mall to spend the time and in the end I only buy in one or two stores and normally it's always clothes, although there are sometimes I also buy some food to eat it while I see clothes, for me it's a relaxing activity. I always buy in stores Sports clothes. I usually buy them in Nike or Adidas, and when I shop online, I always do them on the website of these stores or at SHEIN

I buy both Online and in stores on both floors buy enough and have no preference over buying Online or in physical stores.

Normally I follow a specific style that is called streetwear is like a pretty style of jaw or wide things but I also follow other fashions, depending on the occasion, I get in one style or another; if it is to go to a wedding I put some dress that fits my figure more not such a wide thing if it is to go for a walk I put some je My favorite brand is Nike or Adidas both shoes and clothes but I also like others that are fashion designer brands.

For a new year I would put something more arranged with a dress with some jacket and some more elegant shoes, for summer I would put on a skirt with flyers and a top.

Answer 1

si ok lo estuve leyendo todo y si esta perfectamente escrito gramaticalmente muy bien