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  • Autor: yaritzarivas09
  • hace 9 años

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Ayudenme y corrijanme con este texto en ingles sobre Arquimides.

The legend of "Arquimides and the Mirrors Ustorios" , was in Sicilia, in the war with Romans.
His defense was with bigs mirrors to combat to the boats of Romans.
Another story called "the golden crown" , was about king Hieron II and Arquimides.
The king ordered to make a gold crown, but he was afraid to be deceived from the jewelr, Hieron II called to Arquimides to see purity of gold from crown.

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Respuesta dada por: mateoab51
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Esta bien tranqui, suerte amigo

mateoab51: Oki
yaritzarivas09: And he discovered tje calculation of the volume of the crown, Arquimides ran nacked and said "Eureka" in the street to the palace.
yaritzarivas09: Arquimides discovered that the crown was made of other metals.
mateoab51: La cuarta palabra the, supongo que ya lo sabes. "Calculation of the" sobra y el resto esta bien
mateoab51: Y la otra esta bie
yaritzarivas09: He was died in 212 b.C in the war with the Rlma s troops
yaritzarivas09: With the Romans troops
mateoab51: Ok, vas bien amigo
yaritzarivas09: Graciias
mateoab51: De nada, suerte
Respuesta dada por: lorenabrsck
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Tienes dos pequeños errores:
Jewelr sería jewelry.
Hieron II called Arquimides.
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