Question

me pueden decir si esta bien redactado por favor.

Valentine’s day is celebrated and remembered by a loving relationship many years ago in Rome.
When the emperor doesn´t allow to soldiers have to get marry. We at 14 February give presents to our couple as a token of love.
The history about valentine isn´t clear, it tells the history that existed two valentines which were very similar and both were executed at the same day 14 February, for defending the Christian and his miracles.

After the revolutionary war the people took as a custom writing cards and give presents to their sweethearts.

Answer 1

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Si, esta bien redactado

Answer 2

Respuesta:

tu respuesta efectivamente está bien echa con eso sacarás 10