Question

oigan necesito saber si esta historia que hise en present perfect estabien aqui les dejo mi historia

my vacations
first I stayed in supletorios then i went a quito where my sister to pass a few days and she help me study for the exams remediales after that my family coca return they took me with them to distract myself a while in August given the exams i played with my cousins, also my cousin i play guitar it's been fun
second my family and i have eaten food very very delicious ,for the nights my family and i We would gather to watch movies third, my family and i had gone to many parks where we played football, basketball etc ....

finally return to ambato to study a little more for tests and so to spend tale year with the support of my family and hope my degree of English I can forgive the lies told since they were never my intention never thought that would cause many problems and for that I apologize .

Answer 1

No está del todo bien ya que hay algunos verbos que no están en pasado