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In comparison between the little Martina and my me now I have changed a lot.
As a child I used to be more outgoing when meeting new children so that we could become friends, now I have a hard time opening up to people. I used to always leave the park with a friend almost always, even though we might not see each other again.
She used to be a very happy girl, although she had a lot of character when I got angry, instead now I usually control myself much more.
She also used to have many dreams like being a princess, a flamenco dancer, a model, a doctor, a veterinarian and many more things. Even another dream I had was to go to Disneyland Paris to meet all the Disney princesses, which I finally managed to fulfill. Another dream was to have a horse because my father liked them very much and because he was my favorite animal at that time.
I used to be afraid of death, the dark and the villains of Disney movies like Maleficent, always when I saw the movie of sleeping beauty and the scene of the dragon came I hid under the savannah. As a child I used to play with my dolls and Wii games like karaoke, wiiparty or wiisports. I also really liked playing with my friends pretending to be cartoon characters like the Winx. I remember that I really liked going to school until I said I didn't want to go, but they ended up convincing me by going to the park next to me.
I think I had a very beautiful childhood.
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Respuesta:
In comparison between the little Martina and me, I have changed a lot.
As a child I used to be more outgoing when meeting new children so that we could become friends, now I have a hard time opening up to people. I used to leave the park with a friend almost always, even though we might not see each other again.
She used to be a very happy girl, although she had a lot of character when I got angry, instead now I usually control myself much more.
She also used to have many dreams like being a princess, a flamenco dancer, a model, a doctor, a veterinarian and many more things. Even another dream I had was to go to Disneyland Paris to meet all the Disney princesses, which I finally managed to fulfill. Another dream was to have a horse because my father liked them very much and because he was my favorite animal at that time.
I used to be afraid of death, the dark and the villains of Disney movies like Maleficent, always when I saw the movie of sleeping beauty and the scene of the dragon came I hid under the bed sheet. As a child I used to play with my dolls and Wii games like karaoke, wiiparty or wiisports. I also really liked playing with my friends pretending to be cartoon characters like the Winx. I remember that I really liked going to school until I said I didn't want to go, but they ended up convincing me by going to the park next to me.
I think I had a very beautiful childhood.
Explicación:
Solo tenías unas palabras incoherentes pero ya las corregí.
Respuesta:
In comparison between the little Martina and me, I have changed a lot.
As a child I used to be more outgoing when meeting new children so that we could become friends, now I have a hard time opening up to people. I used to leave the park with a friend almost always, even though we might not see each other again.
She used to be a very happy girl, although she had a lot of character when I got angry, instead now I usually control myself much more.
She also used to have many dreams like being a princess, a flamenco dancer, a model, a doctor, a veterinarian and many more things. Even another dream I had was to go to Disneyland Paris to meet all the Disney princesses, which I finally managed to fulfill. Another dream was to have a horse because my father liked them very much and because he was my favorite animal at that time.
I used to be afraid of death, the dark and the villains of Disney movies like Maleficent, always when I saw the movie of sleeping beauty and the scene of the dragon came I hid under the bed sheet. As a child I used to play with my dolls and Wii games like karaoke, wiiparty or wiisports. I also really liked playing with my friends pretending to be cartoon characters like the Winx. I remember that I really liked going to school until I said I didn't want to go, but they ended up convincing me by going to the park next to me.
I think I had a very beautiful childhood.
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