Question

he escrito un writing sobre un viaje me podrian decir si esta bien o si tiene fallo.
My family and I went to Barcelona last week, the streets were amazing, but the people were not very nice.

The next day, we first went for a walk around the hotel and then went to the pool until lunchtime.  then we took the car and went for a walk, we did some activities like mountaineering and skydiving and I was very scared
The next day we went to a spa, it was very relaxing and satisfying, it was our last day so we set off to the airport, when we were arriving we saw a stream, and in the end we took the plane that would take us home.

It was an impressive trip, sure going to go again, but my next trip will be to Hawaii I think it could be fascinating
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Answer 1

Respuesta:

está muy bien solo en the next day we went to spa debes poner una coma luego del next day

Answer 2

Respuesta:

OK te dire si esta bien o no

Esta genial,la historia muy bonita, pero lo único es que trates de poner lo menos posible la letra y.

Solo ese fallito, de ahi el resto perfecto.

Porfa dame coronita..