Question

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I rarely get a cold or the flu, just once or twice a year. It is usually when there are sudden changes in temperature and my body begins to feel very
tired, not wanting to do anything except stay in bed watching series.

When I get sick, my mother usually warms me some broth or even a hot chocolate! Delicious! Normally I cover myself a lot and my mother tends to scold me because if she covers me, my temperature will not drop. I also usually take some medicine if I feel too sick, I usually take it every eight hours, although it depends on the medicine I am taking. Finally, I take my temperature every three hours to know that my temperature has dropped and to verify that I really do not have coronavirus.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

según a lo que escribiste no veo nada incorrecto tu redacción tienes muy buen lenguaje en esa materia

Explicación:

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