Question

ALGUIEN QUE SEPA MUCHO DE INGLES? que les parece?
instrucción:

I. INSTRUCTIONS. CHOOSE ONLY ONE of the following topics. Write three paragraphs. The first one is an introduction, the second is to develop your ideas and the third is a closing or conclusion. Write a minimum of 100 words. (20 pts)

Topic 1. You are going abroad to England to study and you are staying with a host family. They sent you an email to get to know you before you arrive. Reply to their email telling them what you look like, what you are like, your daily routine, hobbies and favorite activities, what you are studying at the university and your plans for the future. (Use simple present, be going to and present continuous with a future meaning, verbs + prepositions, and prepositions in, on, and at for place & time, vocabulary for describing physical appearance & personality)
lo que hice............

My name is Jema. I am from the city of Aguascalientes, and I live at home with my parents, my brothers, and my dog. I am 18 years old, and I am in college. I am studying psychopedagogical counseling. I am in the first year and I really like it.
I am going to tell you about myself. I am short and have short wavy hair. I have big brown eyes and a beautiful smile. I am a positive person. My friend says I am funny, and it is true, I like making people laugh.
I get up daily at 7:40 to go to English classes, when I finish, I go to breakfast. I have a lot of free time when I am not in class, I like watching TV series and I also like to listen to music in English. finishing college, I will get a job and start saving to buy a car.

sigo todo o me falta algooo????????? help :(
si contestan cosas que no, reporto :)

Answer 1

Explicación:

Está perfecto, te recomiendo que contraigas el I am y pongas I'm, pero eso solo por estética. Síguelo, vas genial!

Answer 2

Respuesta:

En el primer párrafo tienes que poner introducción, en el segundo poner ya el desarrollo y al final tienes que darle solución a un problema o cerrar tu historia