Question

Ayuda porfas, descripción de persona en inglés, doy coronita
instrucción de la profe:
- Puedes describir a una persona usando el vocabulario de la Página 150. Incluye el nombre, si tiene una relación o su estatus actual: soltero, casado, etc., edad, ocupación, lo que le gusta y lo que no le gusta, aspectos de apariencia física y personalidad.

mi descripción de una persona:
she is Laura, she is married, 27 years old and she's in college.
She likes to eat, she likes to listen to music, she likes coffee, she likes to watch tv series, especially science fiction series and comedies, she likes to go for a walk, and she likes to travel.
she doesn't like hot sauce, she doesn't like chocolate, she doesn't like nopales, and she doesn't like apples.
She's short and she has long straight hair. And she has big brown eyes and a beautiful smile. She’s thin.
She's really nice-very friendly and extroverted. She has a lot of friends and she is smart, she is open and warm. She is a kind and generous person. Always have a great time when I am with him.

podrian decirme si esta bien? o como lo podrían ustedes?
les dejo la pagina 150
POR FAVOOR

Answer 1

Respuesta:

She is Laura, she's married,  She has/is (elige la que quieras) 27 years old and she's in college.She's short and she has long straight hair. And she has big brown eyes and a beautiful smile. She’s thin

She likes  eat, she likes listen to music (aqui tenias 2 to, con uno basta), she likes coffee, she likes ( no pongas el to que habia aqui)watch tv series, especially science fiction series and comedies, she likes(aqui habia otro to) go for a walk, and she likes to travel.

She doesn't like hot sauce, she doesn't like chocolate, she doesn't like nopales, and she doesn't like apples.

She's really nice-very friendly and extroverted. She has a lot of friends and she is smart, she is open and warm. She is a kind and generous person. i Always have a great time when I am with her.

Explicación:

Las partes en negrita son las que he cambiado

En el primer parrafo la 2 linea es un parrafo que he subodo pq asi sea mas coherente :)