Question

Quien me ayuda me pidieron esto ES UNA TAREA DE INGLES
Tarea producción escrita "a person who I admire"
Escoge una persona que admires ( famosa o no) y explica por qué consideras a esta persona un modelo a seguir. Usa relative pronouns para dar información esencial de esta persona.
Aquí dejo lo que tengo, alguien que sepa, que me ayude para ver si esta bien o que hago . use traductor.

I admire my father
What I admire most about him is his courage, character, that he is a very determined person to achieve his goals. I admire patience and dedication to get things done. I admire your ability to help others in a selfless way. I admire that he is an upright and just man, that he does not like problems. I admire the love with which he treats us all.
I admire that he has always been a demanding person, I am sure that without him I would not be here doing what I like. I definitely admire my father in every way.

Answer 1

esta bien lo que escribiste, se nota que admiras mucho a tu papá. ( no use traductor)

Answer 2

Respuesta:

Yes it's okay, I liked what you wrote if you tell your dad he will be happy

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