Question

Estará bien esto??


the internet has changed trade, education, health and even the way comunicate. you could say it's one intruments main for social change. with the Internet not exist frontiers for comunications.

Answer 1

Respuesta:

sip esta bien, agregale mas conectores

Answer 2

Aquí está la corrección del grammar!

The internet has changed trade, education, health and even the way we communicate. You could say it's one of the main intruments for social change. with the Internet there do not exist frontiers for communications.

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