Question

Buenas tardes. He hecho esta redacción en inglés, alguien me puede decir si tiene fallos. Gracias .
What we have seen the adults forced to have to go back to study again? I think that with the situation that has lived in Spain, the adults if you have seen a little forced to resume studies. Because the people who have studies have many difficulties to find a job so a person who does not have studies have even more difficult. It seems to me very well that the adults can study or finish the studies that were left unfinished by any circumstance, but it seems to me very unfair to the young people that if they want to do some cycle not the cogen because adults have more note that them. There should be a note for adults and another for young people as adults give you more facilities to earn the title.

Answer 1

A sí con un vistazo rapido me parece bien ;)