• Asignatura: Inglés
  • Autor: santizmestre
  • hace 6 años

I saw a wooden statue that his eyes were red, I was scared and I went to see the statue up close; I searched the internet and found out that it was a statue of the Indian god Vishnu and he said that each statue had its own curse for each person who saw it, I was scared and said that the curse could be broken if on the summer solstice you contacted him , luckily the solstice was this afternoon so I wait for a red light to illuminate their red eyes to communicate with vishnu. In solstice, I managed to communicate and he told me that the curse was that he could not love and he told me that he was going to kill me so I realized it was dark so I challenged him; already in the fight he was about to kill me but I used hydrokinesis, I locked him in water and with spiritual power I turned him into the light, he took off my curse and gave me good luck for all my life. END
corriganla please si falta una coma o algo esta mal escrito

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Respuesta dada por: lunajulian451
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Respuesta:

I saw a wooden statue, whose eyes were red and scared. Then decided see the statue up close; I searched on the internet and found out that it was a statue of the Indian god Vishnu and it said that each statue had its own curse for each person who saw it, I was scared and said that the curse could be broken if on the summer solstice you contacted him , luckly the solstice was this afternoon so I wait for a red light to illuminate their red eyes to communicate with vishnu. In solstice, I managed to communicate and he told me that the curse was that he could not love and he told me that he was going to kill me so I realized it was dark so I challenged him; already in the fight he was about to kill me but I used hydrokinesis, I locked him in water and with spiritual power I turned him into the light, he took off my curse and gave me good luck for all my life.


lunajulian451: Ahora te hago otras correcciones dale?
lunajulian451: Si puedo lo hago
santizmestre: grx
lunajulian451: Hola, alli corregi un poco, si queres podes traducirla en un traductor de confianza para asegurarte. Tambien puede que otra persona lo analice y tambien pueda corregirme
santizmestre: grx me sirvio mucho
lunajulian451: Denada, estoy para ayudar :D
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