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quiero q me ayuden a ver si esta bien redactado mi texto pero no se vale traductor así q porfa si no saben y quieren usar traductor no comenten porque les va a dar lo mismo de ahorita, yo usé traductor pero no me fio asi q mezcle traductor con mi aprendizaje Many years ago in a popular city I lived with my little dog named: Max, we knew how to do many things together, but everything that has a beginning has an end. One day I woke up I had my breakfast and I was already dressed to get out when I realize that it was already 4 and 40 AM and there was a very little time to go to work. So without a second thought I drove to my work like Fast and Furious. But I made a big mistake, I had and accident and my car was overturned, right where everything seemed lost some teens helped me and took me to the hospital in time, sportily time after I left the hospital and I met my rescuers how would become my friends. One day I went to the park with my pet to breathe fresh air and enjoy the moment and at the moment while my dog was playing rolling in the grass I started to feel very bad, I started to give off a green smoke and I started to rise about 10 metters of the ground, that was amazing because I could saw wonder things better than in the earth. And the I remember that I fell to the ground and then I was unconscious, the next day I went to the doctor to see what was happening me and he told me that I had a mutation in my cells and maybe the accident gave that powers After I stayed to see my friends and when we met, we went to eat, when we finished eating I told them what the doctor had told me and they don’t believe me, they thought I was making a joke and I had no choise to teach them and they were stunned. And well, it was my origin, now I dedicate to fighting thieves and villans, Now one of my opponents is Dark Chat and I plan to stop him at all costs.

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esta bien mijo/a

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