Question

You know I’ve been studying for my math test lately. My sister Doris has been preparing her presentation all this week. You don’t know my neighbors have been celebrating their wedding for two days. When John my dad finished his report, his boss had been waiting fot him for 2 hours. Imagine that when the baby my cousin woke up, the babysitter had been taking care of here since midnight. When the play started, Michael my uncle had been memorizing his lines in the theater. By 11:pm, I will have seen all the episodes of my tv show. I told my dad to plow when he picks me up from school, I will have been talking to the principal. My mom and dad were saying that by the end of this month, I will have remodeling my house

ALGUIEN ME PUEDE DECIR SI LA HISTORIA TIENE SENTIDO?

Answer 1

Explicación:

el principio debería ser mejor, con palabras sencillas como en donde comienza la historia, cosas del chico que la protagoniza como edad como se llama con quien vive y así.

sólo eso lo demás está bien pero le falta unirse todo está como separado

tiene muchas ideas sólo trata de unirlas .

Ojala te sirva es lo que se :)