tengo que escribirle una carta formal al editor de una revista para discutir sobre un articulo que dice que deberian prohibir dinero y celulares en la escuela para prevenir robos. no se me ocurre nada ni se por donde empezar
Respuestas
Respuesta:hola buenas tardes, se proibe celulares,y que traigan dinero es para prevenir robos y no quejarse no es para insultar ni nada muchas gracias por su atención.
Explicación:
Espero que te guste no soy muy buena para estás cosas :3
Dear Editor,
Your latest issue called “The problem of crime at schools” caught my interest. I certainly agree with some of your points. However, I believe that banning valuable items won’t solve this problem.
In my view, these items are essential for students to have with them. For instance, in case of an emergency, or simple things such as buying their food during recess.
Instead, having teachers or designated students to monitor the hallways seems to me a sensible idea. Alternatively, the school could warn the students about the punishments for stealing, since that might discourage them.
All things considered, I believe that banning money and phones might not be the best idea to prevent crime, and it would even cause more trouble due to the students discontent.
Yours sincerely,
hitac22372
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