Question

buenas tardes me ayudan hacer mi biografria en pasado simple lo hice pero no se si este bien me lo corrijen
olga Rosa Torres, I am 34 years old (I was born on November 22, 1985) at the San Agustín de Fonseca la Guajira Hospital) Beautician cosmetologist and nursing student My parents are David Torres and Mayda Daza, I have 2 brothers and 2 nephews who are called Luciano and Emiliano Muñoz when I was little was very happy and outgoing and I liked to dance a lot so my parents put me in a ballet academy that lasted until I was 14 years old, we traveled a lot and we knew many places in Colombia
When I was 15 years old I went to the United States on vacation and I met the Walt Disney World Resort
I studied at the institute cristo rey de Fonseca and finished my baccalaureate at 18

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Respuesta: I'm olga rosa torres...

I am a Beautician cosmetologist and nursing student.  I have 2 brothers, Luciano and Emiliano Muñoz and two nephews...

when I was a little girl my life was very happy and  i outgoing with my family and friends. I liked to dance a lot so my parents took me in a ballet academy.

When I was 15 years old I went to the United States on vacation and I went to Walt Disney World. ( no va el the porque es sustantivo propio y resort es la cadena de hoteles). I studied at the institute cristo rey de Fonseca and  I finished my baccalaureate at 18.

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