Question

Hola puede alguien ver si encuentra algún error en esta composición que e elaborado?
muchas gracias




Hi David
I am very happy to see you soon,
The city of Seville is beautiful and usually warm by the weather and its people.
You have a lot to see here because we have a lot of history, you can visit in the center of the city the Alcazar which is a place of tourist interest of the Mozarabic era of Seville next to it is the Giralda that is a tower of that same era.
We also have many historic buildings of important architects of the city.
Although the fame of Seville is for the joy, the weather and the tapas as I told you before. The only thing I don't like at certain times is the stifling heat in Seville, but on the date you come it will be a perfect temperature.
If you feel like going to the sea, it is an hour away, you can also navigate the Guadalquivir river with a boat for tourists and see the city from another perspective from the river
Let me know if you want me to tell you something more about Seville I am at your disposal
Give my regards to your sister Annabelle.Lots love!

Jordi

Answer 1

en la primera oración no va soon

en la segunda oración va hasta weather (no entiendo lo otro, no tiene mucho sentido)

Luego de Seville, en el segundo párrafo, va una coma

solo eso :)