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Have you ever been in Asia?
Well, I’m going to talk about Thailand
This country has from mountains to forest.
I’m sure that you have never experienced anything like that
•Let’s star in Bangkok, Bangkok has been calles the Venice of the East, because it’s built on a river. Also here you can tourist boat and visit the real Bangkok.
A fact is that the people who take care of the river have been making money from tourist for year.
Anyways if you want to have a good experience in Bangkok you going to stay in luxury resort in the middle of the forest. this place is one hour from Bangkok.
The only bad thing about this island is that the water is too hear, also sharks have been living there for a long time. People said that they have never seen a shark attack in years, but the people who lives there have been able too warn people in time.
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Hola, el texto està bastante bien, solo tiene algunas faltas.
Te lo he corregido y vuelto a hacer:
Have you ever been in Asia?
Well, I’m going to talk about Thailand
This country has from mountains to forest.
I’m sure that you have never experienced anything like that
•Let’s start with Bangkok, Bangkok has been calles the Venice of the East, because it’s built on a river. Also here you can tourist boat and visit it.
A fact is that the people who take care of the river have been making money from tourist for year.
Anyways if you want to have a good experience in Bangkok you going to stay in luxury resort in the middle of the forest. this place is one hour from Bangkok.
The only bad thing about this island is that the water is too hear, also sharks have been living there for a long time. People said that they have never seen a shark attack in years, but the people who lives there have been able too warn people in time.
También quiero decirte que la palabra "Bangkok" està muy repetida.
Espero que te haya ayudado mucho
Adios!