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  • Autor: alessandra2008
  • hace 8 años

¡Ayuda!

Pueden corregir este texto si hay algún error o tal vez si se puede cambiar algo para mejorarlo.

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Do you know who Elon Musk is?

He is an engineer and also he is the CEO of important companies like: solar city and Tesla

Now. I’m going to talk about his lifestyle.

He doesn’t squander their money in expensive car, clothes but Recently he bought 5 mansions in the same neighborhood.

Musk always was interested in the environment. That is why all the year he donated some money to special programs that protect de animal habitat

In 2004. He proposed the idea to create a electric car with it idea in mind He set aside some of his earnings and months later he invested 35 millions of dollar in the company Tesla Motors.

When people knew about this idea They said that He was a crazy person.

When the construction started engineers found a lot obstacles. The car needed to be stronger to withstand the solar panel but engineers found an efficient solution to get around with this problem.

Additionally. This car has sustainable features. For example The Tesla works with a solar panel and also yo can accommodate 4 to 9 persons in the car.

Obviously this car only can be afforded by few people.

Finally Musk has a great idea. He wishes that in a near future people could live in other planets.

That is why he found Space Por in 2006.

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Por favor es urgente
Gracias.

Respuestas

Respuesta dada por: camilatomohisa
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Respuesta:

Do you know who Elon Musk is?

He is an engineer and also he is the CEO of important companies like: solar city and Tesla

Now. I’m going to talk about his lifestyle.

He doesn’t squander their money in expensive car, clothes but Recently he bought 5 mansions in the same neighborhood.

Musk always was interested in the environment. That is why all the year he donated some money to special programs that protect de animal habitat

In 2004. He proposed the idea to create a electric car with it idea in mind He set aside some of his earnings and months later he invested 35 millions of dollar in the company Tesla Motors.

When people knew about this idea They said that He was a crazy person.

When the construction started engineers found a lot obstacles. The car needed to be stronger to withstand the solar panel but engineers found an efficient solution to get around with this problem.

Additionally. This car has sustainable features. For example The Tesla works with a solar panel and also yo can accommodate 4 to 9 persons in the car.

Obviously this car only can be afforded by few people.

Finally Musk has a great idea. He wishes that in a near future people could live in other planets.

That is why he found Space Por in 2006.

A mi me parece que esta todo bien, pero no soy ninguna experta en ingles... Suerte con tu tarea! :3

Respuesta dada por: meselarespuestaxd
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Do you know who Elon Musk is?

He is an engineer and also he is the CEO of important companies like: solar city and Tesla

Now. I’m going to talk about his lifestyle.

He doesn’t squander their money in expensive cars or clothes but recently he bought 5 mansions in the same neighborhood.

Musk always was interested in the environment. That is why he donated some money to special programs that protects animals habitats.

In 2004. He proposed the idea to create an electric car. He set aside some of his earnings. Months later he spent 35 millions of dollar in the Tesla Motors company.

When people knew about this idea, they thought that he was crazy.

When the construction started engineers found a lot obstacles. The car needed to be stronger to withstand the solar panel but engineers found an efficient solution to solve the problem.

Additionally. This car has sustainable features. For example The Tesla works with a solar panel and also yo can accommodate 4 to 9 persons in the car.

Obviously this car only can be afforded by few people because it is so expensive.

Musk has greats thoughts, he wishes that in a near future people could live in other planets.

He found Space Por in 2006.

meselarespuestaxd: Me falta separar los párrafos
meselarespuestaxd: Ah pues no JAJAA
camilatomohisa: Que nombre mas bonito xD
alessandra2008: Mil gracias. Me acabas de salvar la visa❤️
meselarespuestaxd: Solo tenías algunos pequeños errores gramaticales, pero está bastante bien!!
alessandra2008: Vida**
meselarespuestaxd: Gracias jajajajaj y denada ;)
alessandra2008: Ohhh gracias.
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