Question

Necesito que lean este texto y me digan si esta bien escrito y si hay algun error que lo corrijan y me lo digan, en lo posible si pueden pasarme la traducción ustedes mismos sin ayuda del traductor me seria muy util, gracias.


I had never imagined i would see myself on the news. That day was horrible and the worst day in my life. I was the only one that see an accident, and all the tv news come and asked to me what i had seen. I was very nervous for what i was going to tell them, and the accident was so terrible that i was still in shock. Before the news arrive took me too much time to call the emergencies, that depressed me and i was all the day thinking in the person who suffered the accident and went in the hospital. Neverthless i answered all the questions, and was perfect to me, help the interviewer.
Next day, i was excited for watch the interview. When i saw it, i started to think that i wasn't so bad and i was great. My friends watched it too and they say me i was good.
After the days passed, i met the girl that suffered the accident and now we have an amazing friendship

Answer 1

Hola! Tu texto está bien escrito, tiene muy pocos errores y algunos detalles que si cambiaras ayudarían para darle más forma como tal, te dejo las correciones a algunas cositas y mis sugerencias.

• Worst day of my life.
• Saw the accident.
• TV news came.
• Asked me (To es inecesario) .
• I´ve seen.
• News arrived.
• It took me.
• Call emergencies (The es inecesario).
• All day (The es inecesario).
• Into the hospital.
• To watch the interview.
• When I watched it.
• I wasn´t that bad.
• I was actually great.
• They told me.

I was good at the interview.

Espero te sirva!!