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Good afternoon teacher and classmates

These days people like to be connect. We spent a lot of time in our cellphones either watching videos or texting.

That’s why today
I would like to talk about Modern Health Problems

Let’s star first about Text Neck

If you feel exhausted, dizzy and you have pain in your neck you will have text neck

Looking down at your phone an texting for a long time cause text neck

And how to take care of it?

Easy just getting a gentle
massage nothing too hard this will help you to relaxing and feel better

Another modern health problem is Text Claw

Have you heard of it?

Is the pain you get in your fingers. One of the main causes is texting for a long time

How prevent it?
You prevent text claw with a simple massage.

Computer Vision Syndrome.

CCV is caused by looking at a computer screen all day

If you work in office we have too many problems

The symptoms are headache and itchy eyes

Finally Phantom Phone Vibration

Have you ever thought your phone is vibrating when it really wasn’t?

Well that is Phantom Phone Vibration.
Scientists said: Don’t use your phone for a short periods of time like 30 minutes.

And in my opinion, you should be more physically active.

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Por favor es urgente
Gracias.

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