Question

Hola, debo hacer una redacción acerca de Expressing likes + dislikes, podrían decirme que les parece y como corregir la puntuación del texto?

I have a new friend who speaks English and tells me ¿What do you like to do in your free time? and ¿What are the foods and drinks that you like?
I Said: In my free time i like reading history and adventure books. I like to watch romantic movies and documentaries with my mom, also, I like listening different types of music but I am crazy for rock music i love walking for the city with my boyfriend i really love sleeping and i enjoy to spend time with my family and friends, but i don't enjoy to exercise and i hate shopping.
In food and drink i´m crazy about for bananas and grapes. I love lemon ice cream also pizza and fish but i really hate eating hot dogs. I also love lemonade and milk. Tea is ok, but i can´t stand to drink coffee, i really detest coffee.

Answer 1

Solo una pequeña observación, cuando comienzas con tu cita textual añades las (") comillas inglesas; quedaría así: I said": "In my free time I like reading history and adventure books..." y sigues así hasta terminar tu cita textual ya que, las redactas tal y como fueron expresadas. Algo bueno que noté es que después del verbo "LIKE" escribiste "READING" lo cual está excelente, porque cuando quieres decir: "Me gusta ir a la casa de mi primo"; "I like GOING to my uncle's house"; el verbo siempre irá en presente contínuo.