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Life began millions of years ago, but at present global warming could end it. Global warming or climate change is the increase observed in more than a century of the temperature of the Earth's climate system and the effects of that increase.
The greenhouse effect is the phenomenon that occurs when some gases retain the energy emitted by the earth after being heated by solar radiation but the excess of gases is what makes the planet warmer than normal.
The concentration of these gases has increased, above all, by the action of man through fossil fuels, deforestation, industries, soil exploitation, cultivation practices, etc.
The excess of insulating gases is causing them to not return to space and this causes the increase in the temperature of the planet. because of pollution there will be irreversible effects such as the melting of glaciers, the sea level will rise which will cause the coastal cities to flood, the pollution of coral reefs, many areas will become desert, etc.
All humanity contributes directly or indirectly but we have time to change the environment.

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